I need help on a poem i'm writing for my girlfriend?

awwwe thats really sweet for you to do that for her, the poem is really good and im sure your girl friend will realize that, its not always about thw way you put the poem together its the fact that counts the fact that its your words and your effort is just awesome. im sure your girlfriend will love it just because it came from your heart and mind so i wont tell you what to add because i think the poem is very good and i dont want my words in it. it should be all from you. good luck